This sentence is not concise. What’s wrong with it and how will you fix it?   He was taken to dinner by his friends

You work for a coffee company. A coworker was tasked with making a quick guide for making coffee but it’s, er, not great. Fix the paragraph below so it follows core concepts of workplace writing. If you don’t know about making coffee, that’s okay! Do the best you can. I’m not looking for a “right” or “true” paragraph here, just one that shows me that you see what’s going wrong here.   Making coffee, in general, is something many people do, often in the morning, though not exclusively. First, you should probably get some coffee—ground is typical, but whole beans are also a thing, assuming you have the equipment and/or patience. Put the coffee somewhere it can be brewed, like a machine or a press, or even just a cup in some cases (there are a lot of methods, too many to list here). Then, hot water should be added (boiling? very hot? lukewarm? It depends). Let it sit, or brew, or drip—timing varies. After a while, pour it into something drinkable. Add stuff if desired. Try not to spill.

Please match each C to its definition. 

Pick ONE scenario. For your chosen scenario, write the interest and desire paragraphs. For this exercise, each paragraph should be 3-4 sentences long. (I’m not looking for perfection here — I’m looking to see if you understand the difference between the paragraphs!) Scenario 1: Request to fix potholes You are a citizen writing your local representative to complain about dangerous potholes on your street. The holes are so bad that accidents have occurred, some serious. You are writing to make a case to the representative that the potholes need to be repaired now. Make up any necessary facts. OR Scenario 2: Selling fitness equipment to a hotel You own a fitness-equipment firm. You want to sell your equipment to hotels as an added benefit for patrons. You are writing a letter to persuade a hotel chain to add fitness centers that will use your equipment. Make up any necessary facts.

Please define each letter in AIDA. What are the main goals of each letter?

Which 1956 federal program created a nationwide system of highways, improving transportation, encouraging suburban growth, and strengthening national defense during the Cold War?

What term describes the post–World War II agreement between labor unions and business owners in which workers accepted corporate management practices in exchange for higher wages, benefits, and job security?

What Cold War strategy, adopted during the Eisenhower administration, relied on the threat of overwhelming nuclear retaliation to discourage the Soviet Union from launching an attack?

Which phrase did the United States adopt as its official national motto during the Cold War, reflecting the era’s emphasis on religious faith in contrast to atheistic communism?

Jane wrote a cover letter for the game designer job. She knows she’s supposed to use AIDA, but she’s not very strong at it yet. She’s come to you for help. Read her cover letter, then give her feedback. Your feedback should make it clear that you understand the basic concepts of the course — ie, the feedback should include language from AIDA, ethos/logos/pathos, and the 7Cs. You can also feel free to make up ANYTHING here — pretend you know Jane and her accomplishments, and help her see how she can write a better letter. Jane’s Letter Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express my interest in the Game Designer position at Expo Games. I recently came across the job posting and felt compelled to apply. Although my experience may not be extensive, I believe I have some relevant skills that could be beneficial to your team. I graduated with a degree in Computer Science, and while my coursework didn’t specifically focus on game design, I have dabbled in some personal projects related to game development. I’m familiar with Unity and have some basic understanding of game mechanics and level design principles. In my previous roles, I’ve had the opportunity to collaborate with teams on various projects, although none were related to game development. However, I am confident in my ability to adapt and learn quickly in a new environment. I can do a little scripting in languages like C#, and I am eager to expand my skill set and contribute to the team in any way I can. Additionally, I’m open to learning more about game monetization strategies and other aspects of the industry. I appreciate the opportunity to be considered for this position and look forward to the possibility of discussing how my skills and background align with the needs of your team. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Jane